Hiding

i walk around everyday smiling and laughing pretending everything is ok i hide my feelings and put on a face not telling or showing whats the real case i hide my scars i hide my blades i hide my secrets everyday

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/24/2024 8:29:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2016 10:52:00 PM

dannielle, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 2:33:00 PM

Dannielle, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT

Eve Roper

Date: 11/16/2014 5:09:00 PM

Good write, Dannielle, It seems that a lot of people live like this afraid to let others in. :) eve