Paloma Walker Poet Rhyme

Hidden Tears

Learn to cry 
with hidden tears
Be afraid 
and show no fear

Be wide awake
And pretend asleep
Scream in your head
Don't make a peep

Smile and laugh
Put on a show
Die inside
No one will know

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Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2012 at 9:26 PM wow, Spanish Rose, a deep meaning here. Congrats for your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 15, 2012 at 5:24 AM This is deeper than it looks and sad. Congratulations xx

Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2012 at 7:28 PM SPANISH...CONGRATS.. ON YOUR H.M.... Have a happy valentine days... ~ :-) Always, * PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 14, 2012 at 6:33 PM Congratulations on your great win! Sometimes we are expected to hide are feelings in life. This is especially true for men. You have described this act very well. Happy Valentines with hugs, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick February 14, 2012 at 6:28 PM Sometimes we do that..Congrats on your win..Sara

Samual Ronthorpe February 14, 2012 at 9:43 AM Very enjoyable write. Congrats on your HM win in Brian's contest.................S.Ronthorpe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 14, 2012 at 9:38 AM congrats Spanish Rose on HM for this brilliant beauty poetry .. exchange tears for luv on this special day.. luv..

Kash Poet February 14, 2012 at 7:50 AM An excellent wrte here.Very much enjoyed.Congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 14, 2012 at 5:55 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "One From Your Anthology" contest Spanish Rose. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen February 10, 2012 at 11:34 AM Good poem ....but why hide the tears - it is o.k. to be sad.Smile and laugh...be happy my friend. - Bless you. - oxox love Anne-Lise