Nesma Alnsour Poet Free verse

Hidden Surrender

Knives go through my eyes
Lungs drowning 
Heart beats burns my soul 
A whistle in the dark

Empty photos
A life cease to exist 

A travel through time
Righting the wrong
My first day on earth
My first murder
A hidden surrender 

Eyes shut 
Eternal freedom
Dreams turn to nightmares
Another fail
A repeating loop in time

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Beata Agustin October 22, 2024 at 7:06 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.