Pipping Stars Poet Ode

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each eye contains an lid
hence
the
word hidden

now lips
never concealed
from
pink
peeled

hips motion in dance
kisses
to
the
center

romance

through winter months warm

summer snow storm

wrapped
in arms
as a
gift

mutual drift

forbidden admissions
worded into
i love yous
leading
hidden submissions
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Eve Roper September 12, 2017 at 8:02 PM Hello Timothy, Love the poem... the imagery is great...Thank you for reading my poem, "Suicide Prevention Anguish Isn't Always Visible" Eve ~`* Pipping Stars September 13, 2017 at 7:27 AM "anguish" ... hmm ... uhm ... yeah ... lovely ... Pipping Stars September 13, 2017 at 7:27 AM oh ... another lovely thought ... "anguish" ... is always visible ... it's called eye contact ... what ... you think i can't read ... hmm ...