Hidden Souls

My soul stays hidden in shadows. I 
kept it hidden from pain. I hidden 
from love. No one couldn't see my 
true self. A bright sun light shined 
over the shadow that had hidden 
my soul. The light shined and filled 
my soul with love, exposing the man 
I truley was. Burning light fills my 
soul with pain. To rise from the 
shadows to be free for the world to 
see and love..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Muthoni Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 12:39 AM
Good work
Shines Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 10:29 PM
beautiful write.enjoyed reading your work.
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 1:12 PM
Hi Victor, welcome to P-Soup - You're good at writing poetry, I like your poem. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - (To get comments, you must give back comments) - Looking forward to reading more in the future. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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