Hidden Rainbows

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The truth gets sidestepped to satisfy hope, a dolorous lesson in life. By allowing my feelings free rein, I've opened myself to vulnerabilities. And upon hearing my heart cry out, struggling under the weight of despair; I was moved to tears. The reality I held so dear was merely a dream from which I had awakened. My life is a never-ending saga of how love was found, shared, and lost. Tears cast no hidden rainbows; only the sadness droplets' release. Pain wraps itself around decisions in life, and yet, I pursue love despite my anguish. One dream, one heart, one soul, words that once defined love; now flounder on the jagged edges of my broken heart. And an outpouring of emotions morphs into tears as I grieve for a love lost to time.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/15/2023 10:16:00 AM

Dear Emile, your poignant poetic pen is deep, rich and mournful. Heartbroken imagery expressed so intimately. Such beautiful sadness spilt upon the page seeps through with ease to flood the depths of my heart with emotion. Congratulations for your lovely win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/15/2023 2:27:00 PM

Susan, thank you for taking the time and care to give me this truly wonderful review. Your friendly words have warmed my heart and honored me, my friend; Emile.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/12/2023 4:18:00 AM

Your way with weaving words and expressing is impeccable! What a poignant and moving write this is! I am truly feeling the angst and pain as i read this. Life is indeed a never ending saga, always something. And this line stood out for me the most “ There is no hidden rainbow behind such sad tears” this should be printed and shud be a quote by you! So good! I felt this poem so strongly

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/12/2023 7:30:00 AM

Thanks so much, you are very gracious with your time and compliments; I appreciate both, my friend; Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/11/2023 10:34:00 AM

Hello Emile, I have just read this poem. I sense a lot of heartache here. You had the love of your life. I refer that as a soulmate. Some of us think we have a soulmate but when one partner cheats -That hurts very much. It is like a huge shock through the whole body. The person that is faithful wonders what they did wrong. the marriage is not the same. something missing.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/11/2023 11:48:00 AM

Hello Emile, Hi! I am happy to rea\d this comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/11/2023 10:42:00 AM

Thanks for your comments, Darlene; they have touched my heart, my friend; Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/11/2023 10:38:00 AM

then the word come out of the husband mouth:" We will not be the same as before. " Those word hurt big time. The wife wonders went wrong. then he gets sick and passes away. While the wife grieves. My friend enjoy your day. /Darlene\