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her moon repletes hidden with the seven veils in secret places foreshadowing sultry shimmers of flame of life budding over in arms of magnolia balanced and naked where the crow had come to rest renewed she pulls with force resolved magical moments of gravitation resplendent eyed a blush of blue bent to will and to want

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Date: 10/31/2019 4:30:00 PM
Wow T this really was a gorgeous write! I'm speechless!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/1/2019 5:40:00 AM
Haha! Very funny I do get speechless from time to time you know! Lol I remember one night I really was but hey that is another story haha!;)
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/31/2019 5:28:00 PM
Now that is a feat in itself. Thanks B
Date: 10/31/2019 7:10:00 AM
Very romantic and a bit sultry...Interesting, TS. I like the bit of mystery...
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/31/2019 4:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Eileen
Date: 10/30/2019 9:54:00 PM
very sensual and beautiful ,
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/31/2019 6:01:00 AM
Thank you Pixie Dust
Date: 10/30/2019 9:04:00 PM
this seems like a metaphor to me, and a very beautiful one.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/30/2019 9:11:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 10/30/2019 6:28:00 PM
She sounds like she's trouble with a capital "T"... with a terrible reputation, how fabulous.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/30/2019 8:31:00 PM
Indeed "T"...."the face is the mirror of the mind, and eyes without speaking confess the secrets of the heart".
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/30/2019 7:23:00 PM
What we see is not always truth. We must look into the mirror to see our own truth.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/30/2019 6:58:00 PM
...it's the lyrics you want below. all may not be as it seems, the protagonist with a T.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/30/2019 6:35:00 PM
Who doesn't like a little Trouble.
Date: 10/30/2019 4:26:00 PM
what a magical poem TS love the imagery and thanks for the link to the music:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/30/2019 6:34:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 10/30/2019 3:28:00 PM
https://youtu.be/OnjWKA0JsJo
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/30/2019 6:27:00 PM
https://youtu.be/OZMH-NvkB4k

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