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The snowstorm done, I venture out from here inside my rented space- a cabin near the mountainside; I'm lured by beauty, all about. How still the air- such quiet calm the dim-lit moon and stars provide. But, shadows add a warning sign; I must respect my inner qualm. The woods around still beckon me; snow-laden trees, their limbs consign a sense of peace, for without doubt- state of quiescence, guarantee. Whose woods these are, I think I know- this sacred bliss, God did bestow. I wish to venture in- but no! For now, paths hide beneath the snow. February 16, 2020 ~1st Place~ Contest: Lines To Awaken Your Muse Sponsor: Joseph May Judged: 03/02/2020 Inspired by prompt 4: "Whose woods these are I think I know" - Robert Frost Required Rhyme Scheme: abca dced feaf hhhh

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Date: 4/12/2020 6:55:00 PM
I love where are you took this poem Sandra. Your picture goes so well with your poem. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving Second place. I hope you’re having a beautiful Easter. Blessings, Connie xxoo
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Date: 3/2/2020 9:33:00 PM
Beautifully penned Sandra, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 2/16/2020 11:13:00 PM
A perfect poem, Sandra, imagery just beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/16/2020 2:25:00 PM
HelloSandra Haight, yes these woods are Robert Frost's. My Favourite poet. Have a nice day my friend. Good luck in the contest. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/16/2020 11:56:00 AM
- A winning poem Sandra ... beautiful and vividly described ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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