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Hidden Paths

The snowstorm done, I venture out
   from here inside my rented space-
a cabin near the mountainside;
   I'm lured by beauty, all about.

How still the air- such quiet calm
   the dim-lit moon and stars provide.
But, shadows add a warning sign;
   I must respect my inner qualm.

The woods around still beckon me;
   snow-laden trees, their limbs consign
a sense of peace, for without doubt-
   state of quiescence, guarantee.

Whose woods these are, I think I know-
   this sacred bliss, God did bestow.
I wish to venture in- but no!
   For now, paths hide beneath the snow.


February 16, 2020

~1st Place~
Contest: Lines To Awaken Your Muse
Sponsor: Joseph May
Judged: 03/02/2020

Inspired by prompt 4:
  "Whose woods these are I think I know" - Robert Frost 

Required Rhyme Scheme: abca dced feaf hhhh
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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 6:55 PM
I love where are you took this poem Sandra. Your picture goes so well with your poem. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving Second place. I hope you’re having a beautiful Easter. Blessings, Connie xxoo
May Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 9:33 PM
Beautifully penned Sandra, Congrats on your win..
Roper Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 11:13 PM
A perfect poem, Sandra, imagery just beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 2:25 PM
HelloSandra Haight, yes these woods are Robert Frost's. My Favourite poet. Have a nice day my friend. Good luck in the contest. Have a nice day my friend.
Andresen Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 11:56 AM
- A winning poem Sandra ... beautiful and vividly described ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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