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Hidden Message

Saying goodnight in many ways 
As these trees sway 
I shall be the one you never forget 
Being underneath the big deep blue sea 
I ponder my thoughts 
As if the memories are not enough to share 
Maybe here or maybe there
I believe these sweet nothings you whisper in my ear
Wishing to be left alone 
Unbelievable is now 
Never able to hear the sound of love 
Though temptation never failed to be in my life 
As if it was my blood 
I'd say it was just that 
Though I knew I would be at loss 
Once you were to pass into the gate of heaven 
That night I took all those memories and pictures out of mind 
Only to let my poor mind rest for just a night 

Say goodbye in more then thousands of ways
As the wind whispers 
Trying to remind me how lonely I became
I lie awake in bed 
Making the pain intoxicate my body 
I only wished for you to be at peace 
Now I know 
My body let the pain enter for yours to be at rest
Waiting to touch the sky 
Running from a long way 
Torn to pieces while I rest my fingers upon these keys
With only emotional touch
My love has gone
My name has been rejected for death
My story spoken to the world through these words 
My heartache no longer matters 
So I shall not complain 
For I laid my own for the one I loved to be in piece

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/11/2021 7:52:00 AM
Wow! This is chilling. Forwards and backwards. I really hope the hidden message is reading it from the bottom line up! I really enjoyed reading this, insomuch as appreciating work that casts shadows on one’s heart. A favorite for me. All the best~ Jonathan J.
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