Hidden Meanings

I am afraid to come out from the darkness 
as in the daylight so many monsters often stand to judge 
strange what they may never know come's truth wise

A victim of past nightmares holds no heavenly ground 
hallowed vicious beasts whom are consumed by malice 
filled within the scorching fire of hate

Your tales are like a whirl wind of deceit 
lets begin by blowing the cobwebs out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Neumann Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 1:48 AM
I like this. And congratulations. Just one question, did you mean the apostrophe to be there? Many wishes, Kai
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 11:18 AM
A late Congratulations for POTD Liam! Time gets away from me. : )
Mhangwa Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 2:38 AM
Beautiful poem! Congrats on getting POTD
Allison Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:19 PM
powerfully penned Liam, I love the impact of those final lines:-) many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Loughman Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Congratulations on POTD! Well done and well deserved:-)
Roper Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Congratulations on POTD, lian
One Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 2:48 PM
congrats on POTD..
Smith Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:28 PM
Good to see you honored with the POTD acknowledgment, congratulations friend Liam...
Pandit Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Congrats liam on POTD!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Wonderfully penned Liam, potent, love that that last line. Congratulations on potd! :)
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 8:15 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Liam :) - Smile & hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 7:54 AM
...love the last line Liam...congrats on POTD
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! A very huge congratulations on POTD!Very much deserved my dearest friend Liam.Just awesome!I'm so very happy for you. Enjoy your day!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Krampe Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Congrats on POTD, Liam. That's a powerful poem.
Barden Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 5:23 AM
Wonderfully stated, Liam, and full of such truth ... most of my hells were self-constructed, but that makes them no less overwhelming, (sometimes even more so). The trouble is I start out by clearing the cobwebs, and end by scraping the walls, fingertips ragged. Congratulations on POTD ... I haven't been reading them of late, but I'm pleased to return with this well-deserving write. Blessings, my friend!
Williams Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations on POTD Liam.Yes it is the ones consumed by malice that we must watch out for. Powerful write...Maria
Loughman Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Your poem...it touches the cord of honesty unmasked...hidden meanings I am sure I cannot see....however enjoyed reading it very much...thank you for posting:-)
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! This is a very sad,powerful,excellent poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned. Very heartfelt!This world is a total mess in all,Liam.It breaks my heart to see all the bad things happening all over,Very sadly there's a lot of hate,deceit n' evil, all over,Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray more for everyone n' everything, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!Please,take very good care of yourself!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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