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Hidden In Plain Sight

Footsteps shuffle hurriedly on by scents of jasmine drop down from pearl white flowers adorning her flowing hair Paradise engulfs my soul recreating memories of old a time when I mattered and life was deemed whole I yearn to go back to that place filled with a freedom of being dwelling in favorable light no longer hidden in plain sight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/12/2016 5:36:00 PM
Dancing on the dark side, I liked this, and certainly know the feeling!
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Date: 11/11/2016 8:53:00 AM
This makes me cry, because I am in reality not free, and long to be.
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Date: 11/10/2016 5:05:00 PM
I am sure a soul like the one in this poem matters to all..How can it not..When this soul speaks of Jasmine 's perfume..it touches the heart all along...Romantic..and beatifully sad..A fave
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Date: 11/10/2016 11:13:00 AM
Aw...come here you and let me give you a big hug.
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Date: 11/10/2016 9:41:00 AM
Wow! Love this. A Fav.
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Date: 11/10/2016 9:09:00 AM
There is no going back Tim. Only in memories my friend. Nice write:)
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Date: 11/10/2016 2:52:00 AM
- A lovely poem, with a sad feeling Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/10/2016 2:34:00 AM
Excellent and very touching write my friend Tim. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/10/2016 12:37:00 AM
Yes it can feel this way at times.
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Date: 11/9/2016 6:13:00 PM
very touching, tim...
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Date: 11/9/2016 6:00:00 PM
A time when I mattered, I know that feeling my friend. Loved your poem though it is quite sad and lonely feeling.
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Date: 11/9/2016 5:40:00 PM
This has a lyrical feel to it Tim beautiful but sad:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2016 5:28:00 PM
Tim this is just beautiful and sad too! May you make it back to that place or another one meant to be as special. :)
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