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Hidden Eye

I have a hidden eye, through which I discern, the staircases amidst the obstacles I have a hidden eye and through that I dig, the happiness buried within I have a hidden eye, through that I trace, the light at the end of the tunnel I have a hidden eye through that I see, the ladder, when I trapped underground I have a hidden eye, through that I perceive, the colors , when life is black and white

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2018 5:38:00 PM

Mysterious one. I love how you did the print of your title!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/7/2018 5:08:00 PM

Well, Socrates had an "inner" eye that did all the things you so masterfully describe! You are in Good company my friend, Supraja!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/7/2018 11:06:00 AM

what a gem, supraja..sounds like an ESP moment!.. huggs

Paul Callus

Date: 5/7/2018 10:00:00 AM

You have a positive attitude, Supraja! Without that 'hidden eye' one could easily give up. Yet you have the strength and willingness to find a way out. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/7/2018 8:40:00 AM

Excellent poetry Supraja! Your words are quite meaningful and deep!!

Supraja Kannan
Date: 5/7/2018 11:17:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay. Glad you liked it.