Hidden Eye

I have a hidden eye,
through which I discern,
the staircases amidst the obstacles

I have a hidden eye
and through that I dig,
the happiness buried within

I have a hidden eye,
through that I trace,
the light at the end of the tunnel

I have a hidden eye
through that I see,
the ladder, when I trapped underground

I have a hidden eye,
through that I perceive,
the colors , when life is black and white
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Mysterious one. I love how you did the print of your title!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Well, Socrates had an "inner" eye that did all the things you so masterfully describe! You are in Good company my friend, Supraja!
Onclaud Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 11:06 AM
what a gem, supraja..sounds like an ESP moment!.. huggs
Callus Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 10:00 AM
You have a positive attitude, Supraja! Without that 'hidden eye' one could easily give up. Yet you have the strength and willingness to find a way out. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Excellent poetry Supraja! Your words are quite meaningful and deep!!
Kannan Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay. Glad you liked it.
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