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Hidden Beneath

Your deep oceanic eyes beckon me to plunge into rippling waves of your true-blue love. Like a seagull, my heart flutters with thirsty desires to be quenched and to feed on the treats hidden beneath. Date: 06/28/2016

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/11/2017 1:02:00 PM

I agree w/the other talented poetesses/poets. This is a superb romantic write, Afzal. Pure poetry, my friend.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/11/2017 10:27:00 PM

You are very kind. Thank you, Freddie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2017 12:09:00 PM

Very romantic, afzal!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/7/2017 4:25:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea.

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/2/2017 11:34:00 AM

I love the line, "thirsty desires to be quenched". Lovely images expressed well.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/3/2017 2:31:00 AM

Thank you, Janis.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/1/2017 5:24:00 PM

Metaphorically beautiful and romantic, Afzal! Full marks to you. Regards // paul

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/1/2017 11:48:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Paul.

Carole Duet

Date: 7/1/2017 12:39:00 PM

Beautiful, Afzal! The "eyes" have it! Carole Duet :)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/1/2017 11:48:00 PM

Thank you, Carole.

Maria Williams

Date: 6/30/2017 7:18:00 AM

What beautiful imagery your brush paints Afzal, truly love it...Maria

Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/30/2017 11:10:00 AM

Thank you so much, Maria.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/29/2017 1:37:00 AM

Very nice one, with beautiful metaphors, Afzal:)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/29/2017 3:30:00 AM

Thank you, Jo.