Afzal Nusker Poet Free verse

Hidden Beneath

Your deep oceanic eyes
beckon me to plunge into
rippling waves of your true-blue love.

Like a seagull, my heart flutters
with thirsty desires to be quenched
and to feed on the treats hidden beneath.


Date: 06/28/2016

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Freddie Robinson Jr. July 11, 2017 at 1:02 PM I agree w/the other talented poetesses/poets. This is a superb romantic write, Afzal. Pure poetry, my friend. Afzal Nusker July 11, 2017 at 10:27 PM You are very kind. Thank you, Freddie.

Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2017 at 12:09 PM Very romantic, afzal! Afzal Nusker July 7, 2017 at 4:25 AM Thank you, Andrea.

Janis Medders Tobechi July 2, 2017 at 11:34 AM I love the line, "thirsty desires to be quenched". Lovely images expressed well. Afzal Nusker July 3, 2017 at 2:31 AM Thank you, Janis.

Paul Callus July 1, 2017 at 5:24 PM Metaphorically beautiful and romantic, Afzal! Full marks to you. Regards // paul Afzal Nusker July 1, 2017 at 11:48 PM Thanks a lot, Paul.

Carole Duet July 1, 2017 at 12:39 PM Beautiful, Afzal! The "eyes" have it! Carole Duet :) Afzal Nusker July 1, 2017 at 11:48 PM Thank you, Carole.

Maria Williams June 30, 2017 at 7:18 AM What beautiful imagery your brush paints Afzal, truly love it...Maria Afzal Nusker June 30, 2017 at 11:10 AM Thank you so much, Maria.

Joanna Daniel June 29, 2017 at 1:37 AM Very nice one, with beautiful metaphors, Afzal:) Afzal Nusker June 29, 2017 at 3:30 AM Thank you, Jo.