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Hidden Beauty

The able had plucked all the yellow on top. They had carted away with all the lemon too; Left only the green on the papaya tree. The lame came and left with the green they met. On the dinner-table was the last pawpaw shock: The yellow were icky,the lemon were rotten too; Only the green were red and crispy in their mouths. 18th Jan.,2015

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Date: 11/15/2015 4:39:00 PM
Excellent poem.
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:56:00 AM
Hi Kayod5, Congratulations on the win. *Skat *
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Date: 2/6/2015 10:32:00 PM
I remember this one and how much I enjoyed reading it the first time as well. Congrats for your win.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/7/2015 12:09:00 AM
Thank you Andrea,sorry I could not reach you for sometimes now, I am just being sick a bit and trying to get back to my feet. The coldness here since the beginning of this year is just too much for me and think that is what is responsible....huggs
Date: 2/6/2015 1:10:00 AM
I agree with Peter Holmes. you bring out the beauty of differences in such an ironical fashion. liked your style. congrats Kayode. Mohan
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/7/2015 12:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Mohan for your Support, I am a bit sick now, hoping to be better soon when I will be able reach you very well as Brothers...huggs
Date: 2/4/2015 5:51:00 PM
Real poetry!...full of angst and imagery Loved it...Peter
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/7/2015 12:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Peter, I am a bit down now,hoping to be better soon when I will be able to reach you like Brothers...huggs
Date: 2/4/2015 12:07:00 PM
A tasty write Kayod5 - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 2:13:00 AM
Hope things improve for you soon Kayod5 - I had a very rough patch recently and wasn't here for a few days myself:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/7/2015 12:17:00 AM
My dear Jan, I have been down for some days now and can not really by active here,it so painful but I am believing in God I will be better soon ;sorry for not being able to reach since...huggs
Date: 1/22/2015 5:26:00 PM
Yes, Kayod5, sometimes the best is hidden in the least expected places! Loved your take on this theme. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/23/2015 12:20:00 AM
How are you today Sandra? I am happy tp hear from you, thank you very much and have a lovely Weekend...huggs
Date: 1/22/2015 12:03:00 PM
Nice take on the topic Kauod5... best wishes for the contest, nad!
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/23/2015 12:17:00 AM
Immense thanks Nadiya,have a lovely Weekend...huggs
Date: 1/18/2015 8:17:00 PM
I love the moral to your poetic verse Kayod5. I think Rhonda's contest will bring out the beauty in many poets here. It sure has in you! A wonderful entry!
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/18/2015 8:25:00 PM
Thank you very much Connie, I am happy you love it...huggs
Date: 1/18/2015 4:34:00 PM
hey, that was great. Truly hidden beauty for the taste buds!
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/18/2015 7:33:00 PM
Exactly Andrea,thanks for the visit and happy weeek my friend...huggs
Date: 1/18/2015 11:54:00 AM
a tropical delight.. flavorful piece, kayods!.. huggs
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/18/2015 12:39:00 PM
Thank you very much nette,have a lovely week ahead...huggs
Date: 1/18/2015 9:33:00 AM
I do feel all in mouth.I really drool>>>>Love
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/18/2015 12:38:00 PM
Thank you Rajat,nice to hear from you...huggs
Date: 1/18/2015 5:14:00 AM
A tasty poem to remember..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/18/2015 5:19:00 AM
Immense thanks Sara,have a lovely Sunday...huggs

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