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Hidden Anger

My contempt for anger always shows
Unaware it breeds in my own veins--
How to be better, my heart follows
A pathway of kindness this like follows


Contest Grook, for Silent One
14 Feb 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2016 at 8:08 PM

very nice one, Franco. Congrats on the win

Susan Gentry

February 17, 2016 at 9:24 PM

Congratulations!

Poet Destroyer A

February 17, 2016 at 9:56 AM

Franco, Congrats on your Grook win. XOX ~LINDA~

Nette Onclaud

February 17, 2016 at 8:54 AM

hello franco... good message.. did you mean " this LIFE follows?".. sweet congrats and huggs

Timothy Hicks

February 16, 2016 at 9:16 PM

Hello Franco. Thanks for your participation in this contest! For me, the first two lines start off good, but then when I reach the third and fourth lines I get slightly confused. What do you mean by "this like follows" at the end? It's an interesting idea to be angry at anger, but I get a bit lost in the middle. Hope this helps. Keep writing, my friend.

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