Laura Leiser Poet Haiku

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                            winter laden skies
                               press chill air over tundra 
                                     warm bear sleeps under   








1/16/2022

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Susan Lawrence February 4, 2022 at 11:02 AM Laura , I can see this scene … beautiful described … and the happy bear hibernating. Congratulations on your win ! Susan :) Laura Leiser February 25, 2022 at 3:42 PM Thank you, Susan. I’m glad you liked this! :)

Joanna Daniel January 20, 2022 at 6:00 AM Brilliant image here, Laura, congratulations:) Laura Leiser January 20, 2022 at 7:57 PM Thank you, Jo! So glad you liked this! :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury January 19, 2022 at 7:05 AM Congratulations on your win, Laura. A beautiful winter scene portrayed! BW ~ Mala Laura Leiser January 20, 2022 at 12:28 AM Thank you, Malabika! So happy you liked this! :)

Kim Merryman January 18, 2022 at 12:24 PM A nice visual, Laura! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Laura Leiser January 18, 2022 at 2:03 PM Thank you, Kim! :)

Deb M January 18, 2022 at 7:51 AM Lovely Laura. Debx Laura Leiser January 18, 2022 at 2:04 PM Thank you, Deb! :)

Paulette Calasibetta January 18, 2022 at 5:14 AM Oh, very poignant haiku! Kudos on your win! :) Paulette

Victor Buhagiar January 18, 2022 at 12:12 AM Well described. Bears do find caves and sleep off the cold season. Victor Laura Leiser January 18, 2022 at 2:05 PM Thank you, Victor. Happy you liked this one. :)

Harry Horsman January 17, 2022 at 10:27 PM Excellent poem, Laura, deserved placing in contest. Laura Leiser January 18, 2022 at 2:04 PM Thank you, Harry! So glad you liked it! :)

Bill Baker January 17, 2022 at 10:03 PM I can almost see that old brown bear hibernating, Laura. Enjoyed your Haiku. Smiles ~ Blessing Bill Laura Leiser January 18, 2022 at 2:05 PM Thank you, Bill! Glad you liked this! :)

Christuraj Alex January 17, 2022 at 9:39 PM A very beautifully written haiku. Congratulations! Laura Leiser January 18, 2022 at 2:05 PM Thank you, Christuraj! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 17, 2022 at 8:47 PM How nice for the bear to only see milder weather. I love your awesome haiku, Laura. :) Laura Leiser January 18, 2022 at 2:06 PM Thank you, Evelyn. Glad you liked this one! :)

Connie Marcum Wong January 17, 2022 at 8:06 PM Isn’t it wonderful how certain animals are able to hibernate. Nature is celebrated in your beautiful haiku. Blessings xxoo Laura Leiser January 18, 2022 at 2:06 PM Thank you, Connie! Happy you liked this one! :(

Brian Sambourne January 17, 2022 at 2:04 PM Your bear is most wise - sleep the winter away. Congratulations! Brian Laura Leiser January 17, 2022 at 7:13 PM Thank you, Brian! Glad you liked this! :)

Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2022 at 11:59 AM Congratulations! Laura Leiser January 17, 2022 at 7:12 PM Thank you, Kim! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2022 at 11:53 AM - Back with a congratulations, Laura ... well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Laura Leiser January 17, 2022 at 7:12 PM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise! I appreciate it! :)

Rico Leffanta January 17, 2022 at 11:38 AM "Clever" bear sleeps! Aloha! Laura Leiser January 17, 2022 at 7:12 PM Thank you, Rico! :)

Sam Kauffman January 17, 2022 at 9:18 AM Laura, congratulations on your win! Your verbs - "laden," "press" and "sleeps" are so well chosen and give a wonderful sensory pulse to your delightful haiku. Sending you warm blessings for the winter. Laura Leiser January 17, 2022 at 7:11 PM Thank you, Sam! I’m very happy you liked my haiku! :)

Alexis Y. January 17, 2022 at 9:00 AM Hi Laura, I enjoyed the imagery in your well written “ Winter” haiku. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a good day- Alexis Laura Leiser January 17, 2022 at 7:11 PM Thank you, Alexis! :)

Tania Kitchin January 17, 2022 at 8:21 AM Laura, congratulations on your silver placement with your sweet poem! Laura Leiser January 17, 2022 at 7:10 PM Thank you for my placement in your contest, Tania! I truly appreciate it! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2022 at 8:06 AM - ... we should do like the bear in the winter, Laura :) - Great written, best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Laura Leiser January 17, 2022 at 7:10 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)