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winter laden skies press chill air over tundra warm bear sleeps under 1/16/2022

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Date: 2/4/2022 11:02:00 AM
Laura , I can see this scene … beautiful described … and the happy bear hibernating. Congratulations on your win ! Susan :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/25/2022 3:42:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. I’m glad you liked this! :)
Date: 1/20/2022 6:00:00 AM
Brilliant image here, Laura, congratulations:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/20/2022 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, Jo! So glad you liked this! :)
Date: 1/19/2022 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Laura. A beautiful winter scene portrayed! BW ~ Mala
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/20/2022 12:28:00 AM
Thank you, Malabika! So happy you liked this! :)
Date: 1/18/2022 12:24:00 PM
A nice visual, Laura! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/18/2022 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! :)
Date: 1/18/2022 7:51:00 AM
Lovely Laura. Debx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/18/2022 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Deb! :)
Date: 1/18/2022 5:14:00 AM
Oh, very poignant haiku! Kudos on your win! :) Paulette
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Date: 1/18/2022 12:12:00 AM
Well described. Bears do find caves and sleep off the cold season. Victor
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/18/2022 2:05:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. Happy you liked this one. :)
Date: 1/17/2022 10:27:00 PM
Excellent poem, Laura, deserved placing in contest.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/18/2022 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Harry! So glad you liked it! :)
Date: 1/17/2022 10:03:00 PM
I can almost see that old brown bear hibernating, Laura. Enjoyed your Haiku. Smiles ~ Blessing Bill
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/18/2022 2:05:00 PM
Thank you, Bill! Glad you liked this! :)
Date: 1/17/2022 9:39:00 PM
A very beautifully written haiku. Congratulations!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/18/2022 2:05:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj! :)
Date: 1/17/2022 8:47:00 PM
How nice for the bear to only see milder weather. I love your awesome haiku, Laura. :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/18/2022 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn. Glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 1/17/2022 8:06:00 PM
Isn’t it wonderful how certain animals are able to hibernate. Nature is celebrated in your beautiful haiku. Blessings xxoo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/18/2022 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! Happy you liked this one! :(
Date: 1/17/2022 2:04:00 PM
Your bear is most wise - sleep the winter away. Congratulations! Brian
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/17/2022 7:13:00 PM
Thank you, Brian! Glad you liked this! :)
Date: 1/17/2022 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/17/2022 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! :)
Date: 1/17/2022 11:53:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Laura ... well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/17/2022 7:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise! I appreciate it! :)
Date: 1/17/2022 11:38:00 AM
"Clever" bear sleeps! Aloha!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/17/2022 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Rico! :)
Date: 1/17/2022 9:18:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win! Your verbs - "laden," "press" and "sleeps" are so well chosen and give a wonderful sensory pulse to your delightful haiku. Sending you warm blessings for the winter.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/17/2022 7:11:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! I’m very happy you liked my haiku! :)
Date: 1/17/2022 9:00:00 AM
Hi Laura, I enjoyed the imagery in your well written “ Winter” haiku. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a good day- Alexis
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/17/2022 7:11:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis! :)
Date: 1/17/2022 8:21:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your silver placement with your sweet poem!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/17/2022 7:10:00 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest, Tania! I truly appreciate it! :)
Date: 1/17/2022 8:06:00 AM
- ... we should do like the bear in the winter, Laura :) - Great written, best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/17/2022 7:10:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)