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Into halves
Knife cuts pumpkin
Damp flames
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Raven Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Hi Ibohal, I love cooking, I have never been near a pumpkin. I love the image that the words within your simple write do convey. Once I start thinking about food all other thoughts go out of my head, I can't see metaphor, just food. I think I am off to the kitchen once more. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend....Mike.
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November 26, 2018 at 12:38 AM
Trout cooked with pomegranate, with a pinch of cilantro, try it you'll feel the muse moaning. Happy food and good poetry my friend.
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