Hickery Dickery

a clock is ticking
                                            as a mouse climbs up the chain
                                                 at one the mouse falls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Burch Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 6:51 AM
Very clever!!! lol :) Well Done Terry!! I love it!!love,deb
Amadore Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 2:41 PM
A haiku that captures the essence of the nursery rhyme...good work.
Allen Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 2:49 PM
I was having fun with this one. Thought it might catch a few off guard with an almost forgotten nursery rhyme. Hope you found it a bit of fun. Thanks for your kind review.
Rhinem Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 2:38 PM
Smile ˜ Like Lightning, Falling From Heaven ˜ Love Always, John!:) *
Allen Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 3:12 PM
To me this was my little joke and a bit of fun. In the true sense of Haiku this is not a proper Haiku but like a bad child I couldn't resist. With many it will be like a light going on either at the end of reading this or a bit after.Thanks for the kind review.
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