Tania Kitchin Poet Rhyme

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Hibiscus In Bloom

Bright coral petals
Dance lightly in the breeze
Enticing butterflies and bees
Serenading garden blooms
A hummingbird flutters and zooms
While sipping nectar from the stigma
Dewy petals shimmer in the sun
A treasured flower garden enigma

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Daniel Turner April 28, 2023 at 10:07 AM Yes this is a very pleasant read, great imagery, Tania. I think everyone loves the hibiscus flower. That coral color is quite refreshing. Have a super weekend young lady:) Tania Kitchin April 28, 2023 at 1:04 PM Dan, thank you and thanks for your visit.

Lin Lane April 28, 2023 at 9:36 AM These are blooming so beautifully here now. With such a lot to feast upon, it's no wonder they attract the pollen seekers. Great lines to describe them, Tania. Tania Kitchin April 28, 2023 at 1:04 PM Lin, thank you so much, I love hibiscus flowers.

Victor Buhagiar April 27, 2023 at 11:30 PM I've seen so many hibiscuses around, some even multicoloured. Pit the flowers last only one day. Tania Kitchin April 28, 2023 at 3:42 AM Victor, they are one of my favorites, thanks for your visit.