Hibiscus In Bloom

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Bright coral petals Dance lightly in the breeze Enticing butterflies and bees Serenading garden blooms A hummingbird flutters and zooms While sipping nectar from the stigma Dewy petals shimmer in the sun A treasured flower garden enigma

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Daniel Turner

Date: 4/28/2023 10:07:00 AM

Yes this is a very pleasant read, great imagery, Tania. I think everyone loves the hibiscus flower. That coral color is quite refreshing. Have a super weekend young lady:)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/28/2023 1:04:00 PM

Dan, thank you and thanks for your visit.

Lin Lane

Date: 4/28/2023 9:36:00 AM

These are blooming so beautifully here now. With such a lot to feast upon, it's no wonder they attract the pollen seekers. Great lines to describe them, Tania.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/28/2023 1:04:00 PM

Lin, thank you so much, I love hibiscus flowers.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/27/2023 11:30:00 PM

I've seen so many hibiscuses around, some even multicoloured. Pit the flowers last only one day.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/28/2023 3:42:00 AM

Victor, they are one of my favorites, thanks for your visit.