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Oh,the Noble Hibiscus! I love your vibrant colors Red,pink,yellow,white, you are the harlequin wonder! Oh,the noble hibiscus I love your mushy velvet touch such a soft pulpy skin you have which I never want to crush Oh,the noble hibiscus I love your mild fragrance that does not harm us but certainly mesmerize Oh,the noble hibiscus I love your innocent grin even in the agony(pluck) make me think, Have I sinned? Oh,the noble hibiscus I love your geneorsity, Appeasing nature, and I adore your modesty Oh,the noble hibiscus Your beauty I can easily steal Attaining your inner beauty is still impossibly surreal Mar-29-2017

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Date: 4/13/2017 5:47:00 AM
Lovely...Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/3/2017 8:11:00 PM
this is a GREAT ode. REally cute where you said "I love your innocent grin" to this flower.
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Date: 4/2/2017 1:47:00 PM
What an awesome tribute to the noble hibiscus, Supraja! I've had several different coloured ones; their large, showy flowers are a pleasure to see. [If I'm not mistaken hibiscus tea is also available.] Regards // paul
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Date: 3/29/2017 3:34:00 PM
what a joy to read Supraja love the personification i can almost see them smiling in the sunshine:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/29/2017 11:48:00 AM
Oh, noble Supraja your delightful writing makes me yearn for my hibiscuses to bloom on my rooftop garden! Marvelous my friend! A 7!
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Date: 3/29/2017 9:20:00 AM
A lovely poem ... A creation ... Nice sensation ...
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/29/2017 10:00:00 AM
That's a beautiful comment... Thanks a lot for stopping by...
Date: 3/29/2017 8:49:00 AM
Lovely!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 3/29/2017 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim... Glad you liked it...

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