Srinivas Veepuri Poet Personification

Hibiscus

You're a Flower in My Garden 8 to 12 lines
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

3rd place


Red in colour, trumpet-shaped,
Showy and conspicuous,
I’m known by the name Hibiscus.
I adorn your garden like Eden,
Birds, bees and butterflies
Fondly come to me 
For a deep drink of nectar.
A variety of wildlife amidst you,
What a kaleidoscope to watch!				
I fall right after I bloom,
But my life doesn’t end then;
I’m a remedy for diseases many.

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MB Farookh March 18, 2024 at 3:57 AM Srinivas, congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your poem, especially, the last two lines. Many blessings! Srinivas Veepuri July 2, 2024 at 1:37 AM Farookh, thank you.

Tania Kitchin March 17, 2024 at 2:33 PM Srinivas, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely poem! Srinivas Veepuri July 2, 2024 at 1:35 AM Thank you very much, Tania.

Sam Kauffman March 5, 2024 at 11:12 AM What a lovely vision of the hibiscus - both beautiful and healing. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings! Srinivas Veepuri March 9, 2024 at 12:52 AM Thank you so much for your kind words! Your blessings mean a lot to me.