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Hibiscus

You're a Flower in My Garden 8 to 12 lines Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 3rd place Red in colour, trumpet-shaped, Showy and conspicuous, I’m known by the name Hibiscus. I adorn your garden like Eden, Birds, bees and butterflies Fondly come to me For a deep drink of nectar. A variety of wildlife amidst you, What a kaleidoscope to watch! I fall right after I bloom, But my life doesn’t end then; I’m a remedy for diseases many.

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Date: 3/18/2024 3:57:00 AM
Srinivas, congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your poem, especially, the last two lines. Many blessings!
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Date: 3/17/2024 2:33:00 PM
Srinivas, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely poem!
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Date: 3/5/2024 11:12:00 AM
What a lovely vision of the hibiscus - both beautiful and healing. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings!
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 3/9/2024 12:52:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words! Your blessings mean a lot to me.

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