Hiatus

...inspired by October Tune by Joseph Brodsky


A shelf reveals sepia-toned pictures,
floorboards groan with memories 
of ages past and old men creaking,
shadows flicker lightly on the wall.

Hours flow as lava creeps, 
and scattered letters lie forgotten,
dust motes float, their orbits spinning,
shifted by the ghosts of yesteryear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Wesley Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 2:25 PM
Just the right amount of quiet creepiness to give this an air of mystery. Imust check this guy out and see how these others inspire you.
Grisetti Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 4:15 PM
Such quiet, peaceful images of my grandmother's house, except for the dust.
Bauer Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 5:53 PM
i love the fact that you're so inspired by various writers and are able to pen such wonderful poems in their styles. it's very impressive!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 6:19 PM
Thanks Ilene! A lot of my inspiration comes from the poets of yesteryear...
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