Hi, Thank You For the Pink Evening

Hi, thank you for the pink evening, Bronco
Went out the flute from the cute cat Kitty
With you I am fine said the horse pronto
Miao,  was the response sharp and witty

Went out the flute from the cute cat Kitty
While tickling the long nose of the brown horse
Miao, was the response sharp and witty
Bronco rubbed his mouth on her to endorse

While tickling the long nose of the brown horse
It bloomed lilies in the head of her friend
Bronco rubbed his mouth on her to endorse
What a night of blue delight they would spend

It bloomed lilies in the head of her friend
The moon in the black sky looked so jealous
What a night of blue delight they would spend
This love story my mother would tell us

The moon in the black sky looked so jealous
With you I am fine said the horse pronto
This love story my mother would tell us
Hi, thank you for the pink evening, Bronco

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24 April, 2020
Pantoum Rhyme - Personification Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper
Prompt : GIF no 2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 10:46 PM
Congratulations on your win, Probir, in the pantoum rhyme and personification contest. Great job with the theme you decided to choose. Thank you for your participating in the contest. Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 9:46 AM
Thank you, Eve for considering this poem worth a placement ... My Pantoum teacher is awarding me a place ... What else can be more satisfying ...
Watt Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Sweet love story told in a challenging format! Congratulations, Probir ~ John
Gupta Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Thank you, John ...
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