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Hi Sweetie

Come not to my grave and shed salty tears
Recall honey, I used to crave donuts and beers.




~11/22/15
~Epigram Couplet contest by Silent One

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Kim Merryman

November 26, 2015 at 6:14 PM

Good one, Abdul! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A

November 24, 2015 at 6:07 PM

Abdul, Congratulations on your awesome and sweet Epigram couplet win. Have yourself a wonderful, blessed Thanksgiving Day. Love SKAT

Abdul Malik Mandani

November 26, 2015 at 11:59 AM

A blessed Thanksgiving Day to you too, SKAT A. Appreciate your comments.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

November 24, 2015 at 4:36 PM

Congratulations Abdul

Abdul Malik Mandani

November 26, 2015 at 11:59 AM

Thanks Nayda.

Suzanne Delaney

November 24, 2015 at 2:02 PM

Congratulations, Abdul: two very yummy treats for the hereafter. Very clever epitah as well. SuZ

Suzanne Delaney

November 24, 2015 at 3:40 PM

No! ...lets eat more of them in the here and now...lol SuZ

Abdul Malik Mandani

November 24, 2015 at 2:20 PM

I am sure you don't wanna join me for my 'hereafter' yummy party, do you? lol. Thanks. For my epitaph, I'll sure keep that in mind.

Nette Onclaud

November 24, 2015 at 10:33 AM

i missed this contest, adbul... congrats on your marvelous win!..huggs

Abdul Malik Mandani

November 24, 2015 at 12:30 PM

Well, it was only 2 lines...you are made for higher stuffs! Thanks nette.

Andrea Dietrich

November 24, 2015 at 9:32 AM

oh my, this is really cute. I would have given this one higher!! Congrats to you.

Abdul Malik Mandani

November 24, 2015 at 12:28 PM

Thanks Andrea, remember to bring donuts to my grave--no flowers, please...and maybe, a side of beer, if you don't mind!

Eve Roper

November 24, 2015 at 9:28 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Abdul!

Abdul Malik Mandani

November 24, 2015 at 12:29 PM

Thanks Eve.

Tim Smith

November 22, 2015 at 7:26 PM

haha good one

Abdul Malik Mandani

November 24, 2015 at 12:26 PM

Well, everybody goes haha for donuts and beer!

Jan Allison

November 22, 2015 at 5:30 PM

Made me smile Abdul - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

November 22, 2015 at 6:05 PM

lol - long as you scrub your fingernails before cooking that is the most important thing lol:-) My scones are no use to you when you are not around to eat them!!!! hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik Mandani

November 22, 2015 at 6:03 PM

I wonder whether my donuts will be as sweet as your scones! Mind you when you come to my grave...scones are okay too!