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Come not to my grave and shed salty tears Recall honey, I used to crave donuts and beers. ~11/22/15 ~Epigram Couplet contest by Silent One

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Kim Merryman

Date: 11/26/2015 6:14:00 PM

Good one, Abdul! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 6:07:00 PM

Abdul, Congratulations on your awesome and sweet Epigram couplet win. Have yourself a wonderful, blessed Thanksgiving Day. Love SKAT

Abdul Malik
Date: 11/26/2015 11:59:00 AM

A blessed Thanksgiving Day to you too, SKAT A. Appreciate your comments.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/24/2015 4:36:00 PM

Congratulations Abdul

Abdul Malik
Date: 11/26/2015 11:59:00 AM

Thanks Nayda.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/24/2015 2:02:00 PM

Congratulations, Abdul: two very yummy treats for the hereafter. Very clever epitah as well. SuZ

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/24/2015 3:40:00 PM

No! ...lets eat more of them in the here and now...lol SuZ

Abdul Malik
Date: 11/24/2015 2:20:00 PM

I am sure you don't wanna join me for my 'hereafter' yummy party, do you? lol. Thanks. For my epitaph, I'll sure keep that in mind.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/24/2015 10:33:00 AM

i missed this contest, adbul... congrats on your marvelous win!..huggs

Abdul Malik
Date: 11/24/2015 12:30:00 PM

Well, it was only 2 lines...you are made for higher stuffs! Thanks nette.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2015 9:32:00 AM

oh my, this is really cute. I would have given this one higher!! Congrats to you.

Abdul Malik
Date: 11/24/2015 12:28:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, remember to bring donuts to my grave--no flowers, please...and maybe, a side of beer, if you don't mind!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/24/2015 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Abdul!

Abdul Malik
Date: 11/24/2015 12:29:00 PM

Thanks Eve.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/22/2015 7:26:00 PM

haha good one

Abdul Malik
Date: 11/24/2015 12:26:00 PM

Well, everybody goes haha for donuts and beer!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/22/2015 5:30:00 PM

Made me smile Abdul - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/22/2015 6:05:00 PM

lol - long as you scrub your fingernails before cooking that is the most important thing lol:-) My scones are no use to you when you are not around to eat them!!!! hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik
Date: 11/22/2015 6:03:00 PM

I wonder whether my donuts will be as sweet as your scones! Mind you when you come to my grave...scones are okay too!

Lin Lane

Date: 11/22/2015 5:17:00 PM

lol funny A.M.

Abdul Malik
Date: 11/22/2015 6:08:00 PM

Thanks a lot Lin.