Hi Nice

My name is heartbreak, I like you
You are so nice, could you make me some rice and also some juice
You are really nice, I stabbed you with a knife, crumbling your whole life
But you still smile, you are so forgiving
I want to do it again!

Hi nice, my name is hurt, you are my favorite 
I burnt you, I talked behind your back
I even talked infront of your face, all the things you didn't want to hear
Your tears are a joy to me, oh the pleasure I get
Your tears are so beautiful 
You can't even look at me
What's wrong, are you that weak? Of course!
I want us to be friends forever

Good morning nicey nice, remember me?
Your sweet friend of the dark, the nightmare! 
You bring lots of smiles to me
Sometimes I wish I could step on you harder, jump on you with all my strength 
I just like to see you break
You fill me
You feel me?
Come here my dear friend, the rollercoaster is not over

Good evening miss Nice, how's your day going
I wish I could get into your mind and find that inner switch 
Twist your brainless switch, find that little hope you live on
I have some "great" things I could do it
You know me, I don't care
I want to see you gone
If only I could snap my finger and make you disappear 
And then reappear. ..I could do that a million times just to torture you as much as I can

Goodnight nice
I know you are thinking of rebelling  
You are awake every night planning on your escape plans
You don't want to be soft anymore, you want to stand up for yourself, you want to speak your mind...
Sorry sister, between me and you, you will never succeed 
So keep dreaming! !!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 9:14 PM
.....but nice always wins, broken but never beaten. Whatever winter throws, Spring follows. great write, njeri, keep smiling, Viv x
Hunjeri Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 5:49 AM
Very encouraging words. Thank you Viv.
Muideen Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 10:33 AM
A beautiful and an eloquent write, this is very great and sad; suffocation of nose of whoever want to breath out success....excellence.........A.M.
Hunjeri Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 5:47 AM
Thank you A.M. i appreciate the comment
Jones Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 3:04 AM
Very brave to reveal an internal dialogue but done so well. Sad that it seemed that heartbreak got the upper hand after a promising fight back but personal acceptance boundaries can soon get that demon on a short leash. Kind regards, Ian
Hunjeri Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 5:46 AM
Thank you Ian. Being a people pleaser and nice all the time can be hurtful sometimes especially when there are people who take advantage of that.
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