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Hi Immortality

Hi there beautiful immortal, I'd like to live forever in your heart

05-04-2015
Your Best Pick Up Line - Poetry Contest

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Skat A

May 6, 2015 at 10:03 AM

Thabang :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*

Thabang Ngoma

May 6, 2015 at 10:20 AM

Hi Skat...thank you, it was indeed fun trying to come up with something original and well 'romantic', wasn't sure how it'll be received...cheers!

Poet Destroyer A

May 6, 2015 at 9:31 AM

Thabang. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~

Thabang Ngoma

May 6, 2015 at 10:19 AM

Hi Linda...Thank you, personally not my favourate, I've read some really witty ones in the contest, but I'm glad you think it's awesome...rgds, Thabang