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Hi Immortality

Hi there beautiful immortal, I'd like to live forever in your heart 05-04-2015 Your Best Pick Up Line - Poetry Contest

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Skat A
Date: 5/6/2015 10:03:00 AM
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Thabang :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 5/6/2015 10:20:00 AM
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Hi Skat...thank you, it was indeed fun trying to come up with something original and well 'romantic', wasn't sure how it'll be received...cheers!
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/6/2015 9:31:00 AM
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Thabang. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 5/6/2015 10:19:00 AM
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Hi Linda...Thank you, personally not my favourate, I've read some really witty ones in the contest, but I'm glad you think it's awesome...rgds, Thabang
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/6/2015 2:02:00 AM
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Oh how sweet ...congrats ....Seren
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 5/6/2015 10:17:00 AM
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Thank you Seren...much appreciated!
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/5/2015 9:15:00 PM
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Original line indeed....Thank you for being in my contest
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 5/6/2015 10:12:00 AM
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Hi Judy...thank you for giving me / us the platform, much appreciated...rgds, Thabang
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2015 7:59:00 PM
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I like it, congrats.
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 5/6/2015 10:14:00 AM
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Hi Richard...thank you, you know it's not easy for us guys out there...cheers!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/5/2015 5:09:00 PM
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that is quite the idealistic romantic one. Congrats!
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 5/6/2015 10:16:00 AM
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Thank you Andrea...to be honest, I've never tried it, came up with it for the contest, but I'm glad you like it...rgds, Thabang
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/5/2015 4:08:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 5/6/2015 10:11:00 AM
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Hi Eve...thank you very much...rgds, Thabang
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2015 2:49:00 PM
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aww cute I love it - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 5/6/2015 10:11:00 AM
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Hi Jan...thank you, glad you like it...rgds, Thabang

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