Hi, I'M Batman

Words dissolved like crystals on my tongue
Moisture filled my mouth, my jaws converged
City lights shimmered in the distance
Wings bashed the air, passed the yellow Moon,
Our footsteps slowly fell into synch 
And I wondered, what about your smile?
Busy bees were buzzing in my head
Inspiration came to me like fire!
“Hi, I’m Bat Man “I said, “Here for you!”
“Superhero number one”, you smiled!
I stretched my imaginary cape
Laid it at your feet, “Madame” I cried!

That’s how I imagined we could be-
Me so gallant and you so carefree-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/5/2011 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations on "Hi, I'm Batman" making it to the First Rounds of PS's Intl. Contest, David! Wonderful work! Love, Annalise
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:23:00 PM
Congrats David on this poem making it to the first round competition in PS contest luv.. G.L.
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest David. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 12:29:00 AM
Nice one David Congrats on this poem being selected in the first round of the poetry soup contest! :)
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Date: 6/25/2011 7:38:00 PM
gentle, bats flying to windmills, with chivalrous deeds in their flights! nice. ;-)
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Date: 6/23/2011 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week David. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2011 2:55:00 AM
Chivalry is not dead! :) This is awesome, David! Love the first line leading us into your wonderful imagination. You could surely teach some manners to the fictional Batman. I can't stop smiling. Wishing you the best! Mikki
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Date: 3/22/2011 4:54:00 PM
I love it David.. an awesome picture painted to the last drop of crystals on my taste buds.. I like that I can taste it as much as place an image with it... shivers me bone.. to know Gotham, has an eagle eye over it.. or should I say bats eye. Lurking a hero in the dark... enjoyed and take care...p.d.
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Date: 3/13/2011 11:49:00 PM
Great imagination at work!
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Date: 3/11/2011 5:56:00 AM
always a pleasure reading your heart. no, an honor in fact!
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Date: 2/25/2011 2:11:00 AM
Quite an interesting one David, love your last two lines as well :)
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Date: 2/23/2011 5:15:00 AM
wow David even Robin could not help this Batman luv.. wonderful expressions of very deep emotion.. enjoyed and thankxx so nice to hear from u my friend..luv..
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Date: 2/22/2011 11:46:00 PM
what a sweet first meeting that was! even better if a true story!
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Date: 2/22/2011 5:40:00 PM
Creative and expressive sonet on Batman, David
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