Hi

Hi James, I've been thinking about you,
looking back on who you were and who you are.
I don't know if this will help, it's just my point of view,
but I can tell you how your life's been so far.

You were shy and alone through most of your youth,
as I'm sure you remember, likely better than me.
The sadness you'll have, I'll tell you the truth,
will not last forever as you will soon see.

Happiness and friends will come and will go.
It's naturally a part of our life,
but remember the darkness also helps us to grow,
so don't back away, confront your strife.

As you get older open your mind
and keep an open heart
for with unlikely people you find
new relations you will start.

Some will surely test your resolve
Some you will miss when they go away
but, all you will need, to help you evolve,
a debt you can never repay.

One will unknowingly teach you to love,
another will expand your mind.
The pain and sorrow you will rise above
and the peace you seek you'll find.

Each joy you'll savor and sadness you'll hate
but all you will need to become me.
Be it choice or luck or karma or fate 
I'm not such a bad person to be.

Though I know you'll probably ignore what I say 
on one last thing I insist
when your older brothers ask you to play
please, do your best to resist.



(The youngest and smallest of four boys.)

11/04/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 12:34 AM
wow, here is a very good one that I missed. And I am happy to see it won the contest. BIG congrats, my friend.
Inman Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Thanks Andrea
Woods    Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Wonderful thoughts and advice in this poem, I can see why it was among the top podium. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Johnson Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 2:11 AM
Hi James. Congrats on the win. I enjoyed reading. "all you will need to become me" has a very special touch to it. Thank you.
Inman Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 7:22 AM
Thank you, Curtis, for your nice comment.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 9:59 PM
Superb first place win James.. big congrats!
Inman Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma.
Lane Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 7:38 AM
Loads of advice in this one, James. I don't think something so well written could be ignore... nice touch of sibling interaction at the end. Congrats.
Inman Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:41 AM
What a kind comment, Lin. Thank you so much, but young boys ignore everything.
Negron Flores Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 7:11 PM
Congratulations in the placement of the contest.
Inman Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:40 AM
Thank you nayda.
Y. Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 5:47 PM
James, I enjoyed the advice that you gave. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Thanks for participating in my contest:-) Alexis
Y. Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:50 AM
James , I will not be hosting for a long time. Maybe 2016 lol. Thanks for participating I really enjoyed your poem.
Inman Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:40 AM
Alexis, for you to consider this write to be worthy to be placed side by side with these excellent works is an honor. Thank you so much for sponsoring this contest and I don't know if I would want to be you when it came to judging it. Thank you again.
A  Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 3:36 PM
James, congrats on your what would you say win. Love SKAT
Inman Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Thank you SKAT.
Hay Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Superbly written, it flows really well and I enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest! Kind Regards, Laura.
Inman Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Thank you so much Laura.
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Cute one..Big brothers pick on little brothers don't they..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Inman Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Thanks Sara, and yes it can at times be trying to be the youngest brother. When we played football I was usually the ball, lol.
A   Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 12:19 AM
the things i wish i could go back and say to my young self, i very much enjoyed your write James, ~Luv Linda
Inman Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 7:02 AM
PD, thank you, but you know, if I could give advice to my younger self I'm sure he wouldn't listen.
Inman Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Thank you Catie, sweet of you to say. Check out Silent One's as well. It's very good.
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