Hey You'Re In the Deep End of the Pool

Counted to ten
Then dove in again..
Oops!
My ocean of love,
Bone dry!
Sorrow, 
Thigh high!

Cynthia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 9:48 AM
great title... do a rain dance! light & love
Alvez Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 11:47 AM
You've got me smiling here! Thank you for commenting. Cynthia
Sweetheart Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 8:07 AM
so enjoyed reading your creative humorous write Cynthia .. nice visuals luv..
Alvez Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Linda, Thank you! Sometimes we MUST laugh!
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