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Hey You Tableau

Hey you! tableau 

            Over here, quick zoom
            Film me, not the moon 
             Ignore that, barn owl
            Wise guy, big eyed fowl
              Shut up, crater head
           I just snapped, then fled

    
Tableau 2 Poetry Contest
   Sponsored by: Joseph May
 Picture 5 syllable counter PS 6x5
 28/03/2021

Copyright © David Kavanagh | Year Posted 2021

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/2/2021 12:51:00 PM happy to be back with my congrats. I really did enjoy the fun tone of your poem. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/2/2021 1:38:00 PM Thank you Andrea, I enjoy experimenting with poems, if something is telling me to change my style I usually go with it, cheers David

Eve Roper Date: 3/31/2021 9:58:00 PM Great imagery, David, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/1/2021 3:04:00 AM Thanks Eve, I’m delighted with the placement, happy Easter cheers David

Kim Merryman Date: 3/31/2021 3:31:00 PM Now this is a unique tableau! I like it! Congrats on your win, David! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/1/2021 3:06:00 AM Heya Kim, thank you so much for calling in, with congrats, much appreciated, I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Edward Ibeh Date: 3/31/2021 11:08:00 AM Refreshingly unique tableau, David:-) Love the humor. Congrats! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 3/31/2021 1:01:00 PM Heya Edward, I tried it from a different angle, I’m delighted with the comments and placement, thank you so much for your kind thoughts, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/29/2021 10:01:00 AM - :) ... so sweet you have written this ... a wise owl :) - Best wishes in the contest, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 3/29/2021 11:44:00 AM Heya Anne Lise, more serendipitous than wise I think, not what I had in mind starting out, but hey, gotta go with the muse, cheers David

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/29/2021 8:14:00 AM Ha ha, I like it. This is a fun one. Good luck in the contest. ;0) Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 3/29/2021 8:29:00 AM Heya Richard, thank you for stopping by, as seen from the quirky different camera lens of my mind, cheers David

Brandy Nicole Date: 3/28/2021 9:10:00 PM "Film me, not the moon" (Giggle) Of course. This is cute, clever and so creative. Your thoughts bring a smile. I have to say though, I do like both the owl and the moon. Just sayin.' :) Brandy Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 3/29/2021 1:39:00 AM Heya Brandy, I was trying to write something more descriptive, when the idea of the banter between the owl and moon, arose, so glad you enjoyed, cheers David

Judy Ball Date: 3/28/2021 7:16:00 PM Too cute David. Love it. God Bless, JB Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 3/29/2021 1:45:00 AM Thank you Judy, was just having a bit of fun, with the photo, and the banter began, cheers David

Jan Allison Date: 3/28/2021 3:56:00 PM love the humour, its a cute pic too:-) jugs jan xx Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 3/29/2021 1:48:00 AM Heya Jan, The willful side our me took over my original tableau, and it morphed into a send up, of the pic, cheers David

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/28/2021 2:38:00 PM This is really cute, DAvid. Love the humor. "Crater head" is a great nickname for the moon. Best wishes in Joseph's contest! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 3/28/2021 2:45:00 PM Heya Carolyn, thank you so much for looking in, I’m delighted you enjoyed the strange banter between moon and owl, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/28/2021 2:20:00 PM Cute idea you presented for this theme, David. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 3/28/2021 2:28:00 PM Heya Andrea, that’s weird I was just reading your excellent, I reminisce poem when this comment popped up, yep this one is a bit trippy and unorthodox, bit like my muse, cheers David