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Hey You Tableau

Hey you! tableau 

            Over here, quick zoom
            Film me, not the moon 
             Ignore that, barn owl
            Wise guy, big eyed fowl
              Shut up, crater head
           I just snapped, then fled

    
Tableau 2 Poetry Contest
   Sponsored by: Joseph May
 Picture 5 syllable counter PS 6x5
 28/03/2021

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Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2021 at 12:51 PM happy to be back with my congrats. I really did enjoy the fun tone of your poem. David Kavanagh April 2, 2021 at 1:38 PM Thank you Andrea, I enjoy experimenting with poems, if something is telling me to change my style I usually go with it, cheers David

Eve Roper March 31, 2021 at 9:58 PM Great imagery, David, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve David Kavanagh April 1, 2021 at 3:04 AM Thanks Eve, I’m delighted with the placement, happy Easter cheers David

Kim Merryman March 31, 2021 at 3:31 PM Now this is a unique tableau! I like it! Congrats on your win, David! Blessings, Kim M David Kavanagh April 1, 2021 at 3:06 AM Heya Kim, thank you so much for calling in, with congrats, much appreciated, I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Edward Ibeh March 31, 2021 at 11:08 AM Refreshingly unique tableau, David:-) Love the humor. Congrats! David Kavanagh March 31, 2021 at 1:01 PM Heya Edward, I tried it from a different angle, I’m delighted with the comments and placement, thank you so much for your kind thoughts, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2021 at 10:01 AM - :) ... so sweet you have written this ... a wise owl :) - Best wishes in the contest, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) David Kavanagh March 29, 2021 at 11:44 AM Heya Anne Lise, more serendipitous than wise I think, not what I had in mind starting out, but hey, gotta go with the muse, cheers David

Richard Lamoureux March 29, 2021 at 8:14 AM Ha ha, I like it. This is a fun one. Good luck in the contest. ;0) David Kavanagh March 29, 2021 at 8:29 AM Heya Richard, thank you for stopping by, as seen from the quirky different camera lens of my mind, cheers David

Brandy Nicole March 28, 2021 at 9:10 PM "Film me, not the moon" (Giggle) Of course. This is cute, clever and so creative. Your thoughts bring a smile. I have to say though, I do like both the owl and the moon. Just sayin.' :) Brandy David Kavanagh March 29, 2021 at 1:39 AM Heya Brandy, I was trying to write something more descriptive, when the idea of the banter between the owl and moon, arose, so glad you enjoyed, cheers David

Judy Ball March 28, 2021 at 7:16 PM Too cute David. Love it. God Bless, JB David Kavanagh March 29, 2021 at 1:45 AM Thank you Judy, was just having a bit of fun, with the photo, and the banter began, cheers David

Jan Allison March 28, 2021 at 3:56 PM love the humour, its a cute pic too:-) jugs jan xx David Kavanagh March 29, 2021 at 1:48 AM Heya Jan, The willful side our me took over my original tableau, and it morphed into a send up, of the pic, cheers David

Carolyn Devonshire March 28, 2021 at 2:38 PM This is really cute, DAvid. Love the humor. "Crater head" is a great nickname for the moon. Best wishes in Joseph's contest! David Kavanagh March 28, 2021 at 2:45 PM Heya Carolyn, thank you so much for looking in, I’m delighted you enjoyed the strange banter between moon and owl, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2021 at 2:20 PM Cute idea you presented for this theme, David. David Kavanagh March 28, 2021 at 2:28 PM Heya Andrea, that’s weird I was just reading your excellent, I reminisce poem when this comment popped up, yep this one is a bit trippy and unorthodox, bit like my muse, cheers David