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Hey, you, chillin’ in my spot, why did you not ask if I’d mind you sitting there in your Bandit’s mask? Couch potato (not some man) just a real cool cat. Where’d you get your cattitude? I want some of THAT. Where might be my popcorn bowl left where you now sit? Did you steal it? Because I wanted more of it! With your bushy big black tail - knowing what to do - you sit comfy on your tush; making me serve YOU! Here’s a kitty treat, ok? Roly poly pet, let me rub your tummy tum. How purr-fect you get! Written in 7/5 Trochee Poetry form, Oct. 23, 2017 for the Picture Prompt Contest: Write Me Something Funny Contest of Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Date: 12/2/2017 11:57:00 PM
may my feline friend be excused? Can always trust you to be on point, funny and engaging in your work, totally adorable Ms Dietrich.
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Date: 11/10/2017 12:07:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your great win with a cute catty poem.
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Date: 11/9/2017 11:17:00 PM
This is so charming and fun, Andrea - love it! Congrats, Friend! :-)
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Date: 11/9/2017 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea, excellent poem. :))
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Date: 11/8/2017 10:45:00 PM
Back again, Andrea. Well done, it had 'winner' written all the way through it like a stick of Blackpool rock. Congrats! Woo! Viv x
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:21:00 PM
Great Job, Andrea Congrats on your first place win. Bandit a badd kitty cat. ---James
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Date: 11/8/2017 1:20:00 PM
Reading your poem was a cat’s meow..Wonderful to share the winners’ list with you...Congrats on your placement..Sara
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Date: 11/8/2017 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations! A delightful pen :) thoroughly enjoyed dear poetess! xomo
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Date: 11/7/2017 10:25:00 AM
I can see why you won. This poem is clever and adorable.
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Date: 10/27/2017 5:05:00 PM
KQQL Andrea Just Like You!
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Date: 10/26/2017 3:20:00 AM
This is so cute and I love you wrote it in your form! : )
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Date: 10/25/2017 8:10:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this lovely treat--a winning poem!
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Date: 10/25/2017 3:58:00 AM
I love love that last line Andrea! In fact that whole last stanza is so true about cats! They always want that treat, and will love that rub on their tummy...though sometimes they get feisty and don't want that rub! I surely loved your incredible write this morning my friend! My sister is a crazy cat lady, if she could she would have dozens of them! But alas her significant other will only allow one! But that doesn't stop her from loving on any cat that she sees! Great Work!!
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Date: 10/25/2017 1:02:00 AM
Hey, hey, this is a so funny cool poem, Andrea! It made me smile throughout. Cattitude, eh ... such an ultra-cool word. 'Fraid I'm gon have to use that word somewhere down the line, w/your artistic permission of course. Very humorous poem, nice pic too. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 10/25/2017 12:06:00 AM
Thanks for making me smile on a bad day, Andrea. And it's got a cat in it! woo! Viv x
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Date: 10/24/2017 11:39:00 PM
Marvelous! Love the Cat and the name, Bandit! WOW
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Date: 10/24/2017 7:11:00 PM
Oh this is so cute, I loved the line "Where’d you get your cattitude?"
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Date: 10/24/2017 4:49:00 PM
Good luck with couch-purrtato bandit!
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Date: 10/24/2017 4:38:00 PM
a purrfect poem for the contest it really made me smile!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/24/2017 4:08:00 PM
Very creative Andrea, good luck in the contest, Regards, Kevin x
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Date: 10/24/2017 3:58:00 PM
Cute poem, Andrea, it brings a smile to my face this afternoon. John
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Date: 10/24/2017 3:45:00 PM
That bandit's feline good...Lovely write Andrea
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