Hey Yeah You

Who's going to fill up the salt shaker
And put the toilet paper back on the roll?
Who's going to end this story?
Or will it "forever" go untold?


Who's going to fold their clothes
and pick up paper off the floor?
Who's gonna act surprised
When mama "ain't" here no more!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ellison Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Love your down to earth stuff... where have you been all my life? LOL Hugs, Jack xox
Brumley Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 1:36 PM
Unfortunately it's the human condition to take those you love for granted, especially in this hustle bustle world of ours. A Lovely verse that requires contemplation of appreciation.
Gooden Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 1:00 PM
Hey Judy, nice write. Enjoyed.
Nair Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 9:08 AM
A neat write about a whole lot of tidying up needed, enjoyed it, Judy! :) Jag
Williams Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 9:00 AM
Judy, so many unanswered questions..I like it..David
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