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Hey That's My Teepee

Humans are a strange lot, don't you agree Should take lessons from the animals, you and me Only kill to survive Not to contrive Nasty schemes to take over another's teepee

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 5/5/2017 5:33:00 PM

I thought you meant the "blanket tent"//remember them? (You had them as a young gent)//the good old days//now it just stays//folded-up, put-away, bent. (whoops, I'm probably in trouble with the censors here:-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/5/2017 7:51:00 PM

NAW! Seems perfectly innocent to me! I'm not up to date with the latest "folded-up, put-away, bent" tents!!! LOL Glad to "see" you again... GOOD EVENING JOHN JOHN!!!