Hey Mr Universe

Hey Mr. Universe

Hey Mr Universe, My Heart is so sad, Has everyone in this world gone mad!
So much destruction all over the nation, Whole countries suffering Death and Starvation.
What has happened to cause all this pain?That people kill for power and gain.

A human life was once a precious gift, But the world’s leaders are causing a rift,
Amongst their own people, amongst their own kin, When will they realise to kill is a sin.
Despair and hunger go hand in hand, What happened to tilling, and feeding by hand,
Not drilling for oil, Or killing for spoil.

Where can it lead? There are people to feed, 
but no! They want power, Don’t they know poor people cower,
Down to extremists, religion, dictators, Where’s all this damage going to take us?

Nature will fight back, she knows she is owed, Floods, earthquakes, tsunamis, Volcanoes ready to explode.
Each country has suffered, but people look away, Some try to help, but sometimes there’s no way.
We all once were brothers, not separate, not others.
Something terrible’s happened for life to be lessened.

Taken for granted, rich people play, Whilst poor people shrink into nothing each day.
What does the future hold for us all? If we ignore all the signals, we’ll all surely fall,
The balance is threatened, so called progression, We worry each day and talk of recession.
Whilst elsewhere it seems there is deliberate ferocity, Killing and maiming just two such atrocity’s.
Dignified people these nations once were, Now only murder and genocide occur,

What must they think of their fellow man, Letting their children die while they can,
Do something to help them, there must be a way, Help us, please help us do something today.
Before Mr. Universe looks down on us all, And tells us and shows us, we’re all going to fall,

The rich and the famous, the mighty, the poor, Will anyone be here after the mighty core,
Has exploded, imploded, and waged its own war, Upon mankind as a whole, the great Gaia takes its toll,
Ferocious anger will be released, no humans able to stop this mighty beast,
Save our people, before it’s too late, Help us to save them and all will abate!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/31/2012 8:43:00 PM
YOu touched on a LOT with this nicely rhymed poem, Deborah. Yes, indeed, Mr. Universe, please save us!!!
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Date: 7/16/2012 4:46:00 PM
our own little hell seems to be getting worse here too...day by day we sink into sadness... is it a judgement?
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Date: 7/11/2012 8:03:00 AM
I am so happy I was able to read your poetry today Deborah. Thank you for sharing your writing with us always. So many diverse poems here and always a pleasure to read. Hoping you will continue to find the inspiration to write. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2012 4:17:00 AM
well, prophesy is taking place. Nice write. - JH
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Date: 7/10/2012 8:22:00 AM
very profoundly written of the world today, and welcome to poetry soup, if you need anything, pretty much anyone here will assist you. and~ :) thanks for the comment, it is appreciated, Cindy
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Date: 7/10/2012 8:15:00 AM
Thanks for the kind review of my work..Welcome to soup..I hope that your stay is long with many more works like this one..Sara
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