Hey Babe

Hey babe, please listen to me now
Life is easy and simple that's all
Dont get quirky or jumpy you might fall
Learn to take a break and walk down the hall.
 
I know things dont go the way we want
But please dont lose hope and say you cant
I made broken promises and know my words dont count
But come and take my hand, we'll both stand.
 
Let me tell you something babe, please close your eyes
Lend me your hand once last time and feel this cube of ice
Isn't it cold yet it melts in your tiny, warm hand
That's my heart babe, before i was ever in your hand.
 
Here are words for you, promise me you'll do
Dont be afraid to try new things over and over dear
I know you're strong inside and out but tends to cross over
Keep your faith in track and dont forget to look back.
 
Honey i know it's been terrible but I trust you
I might be gone now but my love won't just go
Follow your dreams and make more mistakes
I'll be just right here, with you all the way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/14/2012 11:58:00 AM
again another nice poem you must love your man alot x david scott
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:26:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Try"my love won't just go" instead of "don't just go". You have very good english to write these poems the way you do...
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:29:00 AM
I will take your advice into action. thank you very much :)
Date: 3/7/2012 8:44:00 AM
Beautifully Written... Well done. Great visuals and written in an unique way... I loved this.
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