Hexa What

Hexa What ?

 Caught tight here in your arms
I find peace with your charge
Hid for now from life's harms
Blind, hurt, put up by charm
Love with you can be hard
And I am still here chard
 
  Hold me close right here
Bring me peace I hear
Kiss me soft now dear  
Chase way all the fear
Hold me, love me here

  A gift we share
We took a dare
Had a child here
No time for air

  Hold me here
Shed a tear
I miss you

  I cried
We wept

  My
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Brown Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Ruth. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 6:32 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Ruth, also loved the title thats what I thought... xx
Kendrick Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 3:42 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
A   Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 11:31 AM
Ruth~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day, pd
Courtney Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 12:04 PM
thank you
Williams Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 11:00 AM
Ruth hexa, great, thanks for entering and well done..David
Courtney Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 12:05 PM
thank you for correcting me on my form. I enjoyed writting and fixing it.
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 7:55 AM
funny way to do your title and cool poem!! Congratulations to you.
Courtney Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 12:06 PM
thank you Andrea I have been having a blast with the poetry here.
Williams Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 3:38 PM
Hi Ruth, as I cannot soup you, thanks for entering this poem, but would you mind altering it to suit the rules of this contest, you need to start with 6 lines each one having 6 syll, then 5lines 5syll and so-on down to 1 line 1 syll.. many thanks...
Courtney Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 12:07 PM
thanks David turned mail on.
Courtney Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Now I'll have to flubb another as to make sure it will work :)
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