Hesitation

1/10/19

Hesitation

Drum, drum, drum, drum, 
The beating of the hearts, 
The air dense with uneven breaths,
Hesitation.

Intimate faces but strangers now
What a twist 
Of chances that we both muster a “hello,”
Sinking into buzz lines of music,
A sip of Flaming Dr. Pepper, 
Hesitation. 

Drum, drum, drum, drum, 
The hearts knock behind thick 
Walls, the music, 
The camouflage for the chill 
Air, static that can kill a fly
In one zap.  
Hesitation. 

A chilling war, 
A gulp of Boiler Maker
To erupt any lines, to combust, 
To blast dynamite through walls, 
To make them crumble, 
To die, 
Hesitation.

Nursing the empty cup,
The palpitation, the thickness
Of the condensing air.  
A drum of defeat,
Hesitation.
 
Leaving you in one piece
To nurse the Dark And Stormy.

Free verse style only
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashley Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 9:27 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed the feeling of your poem, the hesitation, anticipation and defeat expressed through your atmospheric and emotional imagery. Awesome expression especially your last two lines. Congratulations, Lily, on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Nguyen Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 7:44 PM
Susan, your thoughts are very meaningful to me and I appreciate them very much!!!
Pinet Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations Lily! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Nguyen Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 7:50 PM
Emile, I am honored to be a part of your competition and thank you for your kind words and recognition.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 7:25 PM
I like the way this moves along, like the beat of a drum. It kept me moving, and kind of skipping. I liked that a lot, Lily.
Nguyen Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 11:10 AM
Thank you Caren! I appreciate your comment!
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