Hesitant

Aye
and to sigh,
yet never goodbye...
our reluctance to say..
to close..to leave..
to part..to kiss
farewell;
weider-sehn ,perhaps
au-revoir..later..
see you..wave..then watch
'til
we turn away
and cannot see
no more...
Aye
and to sigh.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 3:10 PM
I agree with what Carol says just below.
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 8:15 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Brian. Love, Carol
Merryman Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 6:30 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Brian. Love, Kim
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