He’s Smooth-I’m Breathless

And it’s just like the ocean under the moon
Oh, it’s the same as the emotion I get from you
You’ve got the kind of lov’n that can be so smooth, yeah
—Itaal Shur, Robert Thomas

He’s Smooth-I’m Breathless

Rob’s smooth, intoxicant, erotic voice.
He sings slowly with sass, a charming rasp.
For ringing in new year, he was my choice.
The instruments’ charm me, I’m in their grasp.

A noddle swoon, elixir fix of cool.
An enchantment of sea and moon, in tides.
Breathless in nineteen- ninety-nine whirlpool.
In sultry croon  - I lose my mind, besides.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Proxenos Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Wow haven't each one of us fallen in love with a song idol or band, or member of a band. our hearts a flutter we would go to school and in hotter than hot excitement discuss how you so sizzly describe in your write, our heartthrobs, until the end of break bell rang. Some we merely just really enjoy listening to these days. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win.......
Crandall Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 4:41 PM
cool rhymes!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 7:12 AM
Thank you, David! :)
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 4:33 AM
- Congratulations, Kim ... lovely poem :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Hind Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 9:18 PM
Very passionate and erotic- liked the end
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Canerdy Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 7:55 PM
Your poem makes me think of the singers that have made me swoon through the years! CONGRATS on your win, Kim. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Thank you, Janice! :)
Famuyiwa Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 7:44 PM
A story told using a comely poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Thank you :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 12:52 PM
This too is SMOOTH. And smokin'.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 3:21 PM
THank you, my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 9:15 AM
How can I not admire your exotic love poem. Sure to gain a high placement. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 12:46 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Volumes Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 7:04 AM
Kim this is such a cheerful poem, to describe breathless. Back in the day, being breathless at a concert or just listening to our favourite performers was quite normal. You brought back wonderful memories. My first live concert was to see the Monkees when I was 13. I thought Mickey Dolenz was the coolest thing EVER. Your poem is wonderful.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 12:47 PM
That must have been so fun! Thank you!
Greenhough Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 8:58 AM
A great poem. So many of us have happy memories of an artistic idol. Have a lovely long weekend and keep writing these spectacular poems.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 11:02 AM
Thank you, Hilda! Happy weekend!
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