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He's Not the One

Baby girl please listen to me 
Don't fall in love so soon
He's fooling you
Don't let your innocent mind be fooled from his sweet charming 
Read the lies in his eyes
Don't get comfortable with his hugs 
He's an empty soul
Be the one with a mature sense because you're smart and know better 
He's full of himself
Look beyond his handsomeness 
His heart is a black coal 
He's nothing but trouble 
Baby girl please listen to me 
Don't go fall in love with him because he's got a BMW and a few bucks to treat you
He's a show off heartbreaker no good for you
Don't sell your pure heart to him my girl
He's not the one... Trust me!

       Smile

Akkina R Downing

Copyright © Akkina Downing | Year Posted 2017

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Silent One Date: 12/25/2017 10:45:00 AM How many young ladies have rushed in too soon.... we all learn though... well most of us... well written Kina.. Login to Reply

Mike Reed Date: 8/2/2017 4:25:00 AM Akkina, No He Isn't! Yet I might Bee. Ha! Are You on Facebook? Mike Reed Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 5/20/2017 8:57:00 AM Wow! You go, girl. This is pure women wisdom laid out in truth soundtracks, Akkina. This poem is so fresh and real. Love the line ... read the lies in his eyes. That is spiritually deep. You got the gift of a message poetess for sure. Excellent poem. A 7 for you. Keep dropping the love and knowledge, dear. May love light your path always. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/20/2017 9:19:00 AM Thank you so very much Freddie, I appreciate your lovely visit and comment. It means a lot :)

James Inman Date: 4/28/2017 11:44:00 AM So you listened to your mother. A very rare and bright woman you are. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 4/28/2017 12:47:00 PM Actually it was my great granny and oh yes I did and thank you :)

Emile Pinet Date: 2/28/2017 9:51:00 AM Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. This poem flows well and carries a message aimed at the heart. Emile. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 3/1/2017 6:53:00 PM Thank you so much Emile, it means a lot to me :)

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 2/11/2017 1:01:00 PM Akkina, Very nicely done....this is great advice....if only she will take it. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 2/15/2017 7:23:00 PM Thank you so much Paulette :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/8/2017 5:16:00 PM VERY good advice, Akkina. A well written poem of wisdom. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 2/8/2017 5:42:00 PM Thank you so much Andrea, very much appreciated :)

Daniel Turner Date: 2/8/2017 11:44:00 AM Sounds like good advice, Kina. Sometimes things can be hard to see, if you are standing too close. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 2/8/2017 12:15:00 PM Yes it was, I was grateful for it :)