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He's Not the One

Baby girl please listen to me Don't fall in love so soon He's fooling you Don't let your innocent mind be fooled from his sweet charming Read the lies in his eyes Don't get comfortable with his hugs He's an empty soul Be the one with a mature sense because you're smart and know better He's full of himself Look beyond his handsomeness His heart is a black coal He's nothing but trouble Baby girl please listen to me Don't go fall in love with him because he's got a BMW and a few bucks to treat you He's a show off heartbreaker no good for you Don't sell your pure heart to him my girl He's not the one... Trust me! Smile Akkina R Downing

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Silent One
Date: 12/25/2017 10:45:00 AM
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How many young ladies have rushed in too soon.... we all learn though... well most of us... well written Kina..
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Mike Reed
Date: 8/2/2017 4:25:00 AM
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Akkina, No He Isn't! Yet I might Bee. Ha! Are You on Facebook? Mike Reed
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 5/20/2017 8:57:00 AM
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Wow! You go, girl. This is pure women wisdom laid out in truth soundtracks, Akkina. This poem is so fresh and real. Love the line ... read the lies in his eyes. That is spiritually deep. You got the gift of a message poetess for sure. Excellent poem. A 7 for you. Keep dropping the love and knowledge, dear. May love light your path always.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 5/20/2017 9:19:00 AM
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Thank you so very much Freddie, I appreciate your lovely visit and comment. It means a lot :)
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James Inman
Date: 4/28/2017 11:44:00 AM
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So you listened to your mother. A very rare and bright woman you are.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 4/28/2017 12:47:00 PM
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Actually it was my great granny and oh yes I did and thank you :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/28/2017 9:51:00 AM
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Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. This poem flows well and carries a message aimed at the heart. Emile.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 3/1/2017 6:53:00 PM
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Thank you so much Emile, it means a lot to me :)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/11/2017 1:01:00 PM
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Akkina, Very nicely done....this is great advice....if only she will take it.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/15/2017 7:23:00 PM
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Thank you so much Paulette :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/8/2017 5:16:00 PM
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VERY good advice, Akkina. A well written poem of wisdom.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/8/2017 5:42:00 PM
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Thank you so much Andrea, very much appreciated :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/8/2017 11:44:00 AM
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Sounds like good advice, Kina. Sometimes things can be hard to see, if you are standing too close.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/8/2017 12:15:00 PM
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Yes it was, I was grateful for it :)

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