Hershey

they say 
it's the sweetest
place on earth

i say
they've never been
inside dreams
with you

it's there
where kisses
are really
made

chocolatedreamfree verse

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Chris Green

November 11, 2019 at 7:00 AM

Loved this sweet poem about kisses sweeter than anything Hershey could ever produce. This one was chocolatey delicious. : )

Sandra Adams

November 11, 2019 at 9:58 AM

Thank you my friend...i was trying to convince myself i didn't need their kisses... they gave me my $10 free money and i spent it on toys for the grandkids, temptation was there, trust me, but i did rather well resisting the sweet temptation all around me... hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich

November 10, 2019 at 7:52 PM

my sister lives near that place and in all my years I have not gotten back east to see it.

Sandra Adams

November 10, 2019 at 9:20 PM

i am not far from your sister then...less than 2 hours away...i just had a 13 hour day there yesterday with our hs band, it was state championships...i go there often...

Andrea Dietrich

November 10, 2019 at 7:52 PM

LOVE it. you even do fantastic with a short little poem like this!!

Sandra Adams

November 10, 2019 at 9:21 PM

Thank you my friend...just playing on words.... :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

November 10, 2019 at 4:16 PM

This poem is so cute and sweet that I could just 'pinch its cheeks!' Smiles, Gershon

Sandra Adams

November 10, 2019 at 5:19 PM

lol...i had a 13 hour work day up there yesterday... they are already decorated for christmas...i didn't take pictures only because there were always people in the holiday scenes taking selfies and group photos...i barely was able to get this photo, although i have been there so many times i have pictures on my computer from previous visits! thank you for your fun comment....hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 10, 2019 at 1:45 PM

- Really sweet kiss ... I must have one, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

November 10, 2019 at 3:55 PM

thank you Anne-Lise, they gave us mini and full-size hershey bars and they gave us a buffet of many wonderful foods, they did give me vouchers to spend on whatever i wanted so i got toys for the grandchildren...i don't need much chocolate, although i do love it... hugs

Silent One

November 9, 2019 at 5:04 PM

you are not allowed to much chocolate lol...

Sandra Adams

November 9, 2019 at 6:42 PM

Ha they didn’t feed us chocolate at the fancy lodge they took us to but did give us pasta, bread with chocolate butter , meatballs , cheesecake, lemon cake and peanut butter pie ... I didn’t eat everything offered but some. Sugars been low all day

Richard Lamoureux

November 9, 2019 at 8:47 AM

Delicious! What a perfect little poem! Hugs Rick.

Sandra Adams

November 9, 2019 at 6:42 PM

Thank you Rick :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

November 9, 2019 at 8:36 AM

Been there twice in the last two years with grand kids--a sweet place as you say--loved the tour they give and spent a lot in those shops!!

Sandra Adams

November 9, 2019 at 8:46 AM

I am lucky, i get bus trips there all the time, they give us free admission to everything, and we get vouchers for free goodies from the shops...one of the many perks of being a bus driver! the tour is something i always do, regardless of how many times i have been there...just love the singing cows... have a great weekend my friend... hugs :)