Heron

silently heron 
flies low over marsh...
high tide covers all 


Sponsor:Nathan_________~~D
Contest:Your Best Haiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 30, 2012 at 6:34 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Fabiyas M V

November 24, 2012 at 7:47 AM

Well crafted haiku,Sara.Congratulations on your win, though belated!

Yanny Widjanarko

November 22, 2012 at 5:15 PM

I just realized that you are on the winner list of this contest Sara, so sorry for the belated congrats, but this haiku is gorgeous and you always give a good work in depicting a beauty through your words-Hug, Yanny

Joseph May

November 21, 2012 at 6:11 AM

a belated congrats on your win Sara

Andrea Dietrich

November 19, 2012 at 9:48 PM

hi, there, Sara. For me this is not your best, because I have seen others this past month from you that were outstanding, but this is GOOD and CONGRATS to you!!!(also, mine was not my best either, but I was in a hurry to find something. hahaha)

Poet Destroyer A

November 19, 2012 at 2:42 PM

Sara:-) love Nathan's taste and wins....congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD

Len Gasun

November 19, 2012 at 10:01 AM

Hi, Sara! Many congratulations on your win my dear friend! love/hugs, Leonora

Tim Ryerson

November 19, 2012 at 9:25 AM

I can picture the scene vividly thanks to your great description, Sarah...Congratulations - Tim

Gail Debole

November 19, 2012 at 5:48 AM

CONGRATULATIONS on your win, and a happy thanksgiving to you!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 19, 2012 at 1:43 AM

CONGRATS SARA ON A WONDERFUL WRITE AND WIN FOR BEST HAIKU LUV .. WISHING U AND FAMILY A VERY HAPPY AND BLESSED tHANKSGIVING ..

Nathan D.

November 18, 2012 at 9:37 PM

good haiku' Nate

Russell Sivey

November 14, 2012 at 3:20 PM

I love the mixing of low to high parts of this write! This was done very deliberately I know and was very effective! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful and perfectly crafted poem this afternoon! What a delightful and fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

November 14, 2012 at 3:09 PM

this is great work.I love the contrast!

Heron

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