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silently heron flies low over marsh... high tide covers all
Sponsor:Nathan_________~~D Contest:Your Best Haiku

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Date: 11/30/2012 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/24/2012 7:47:00 AM
Well crafted haiku,Sara.Congratulations on your win, though belated!
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Date: 11/22/2012 5:15:00 PM
I just realized that you are on the winner list of this contest Sara, so sorry for the belated congrats, but this haiku is gorgeous and you always give a good work in depicting a beauty through your words-Hug, Yanny
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Date: 11/21/2012 6:11:00 AM
a belated congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 11/19/2012 9:48:00 PM
hi, there, Sara. For me this is not your best, because I have seen others this past month from you that were outstanding, but this is GOOD and CONGRATS to you!!!(also, mine was not my best either, but I was in a hurry to find something. hahaha)
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Date: 11/19/2012 2:42:00 PM
Sara:-) love Nathan's taste and wins....congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD
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Date: 11/19/2012 10:01:00 AM
Hi, Sara! Many congratulations on your win my dear friend! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/19/2012 9:25:00 AM
I can picture the scene vividly thanks to your great description, Sarah...Congratulations - Tim
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Date: 11/19/2012 5:48:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win, and a happy thanksgiving to you!
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Date: 11/19/2012 1:43:00 AM
CONGRATS SARA ON A WONDERFUL WRITE AND WIN FOR BEST HAIKU LUV .. WISHING U AND FAMILY A VERY HAPPY AND BLESSED tHANKSGIVING ..
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Date: 11/18/2012 9:37:00 PM
good haiku' Nate
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Date: 11/14/2012 3:20:00 PM
I love the mixing of low to high parts of this write! This was done very deliberately I know and was very effective! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful and perfectly crafted poem this afternoon! What a delightful and fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/14/2012 3:09:00 PM
this is great work.I love the contrast!
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