Hero

The Lone Ranger came to visit me last night. 
He was perfect, his shiny six-guns hanging 
on his hip, and the mask (to protect his real identity!)  
"Howdy!" I said;  "Hiya, pardner!" he replied, 
and I motioned for him to take a seat. "No thanks," 
he groaned, "I think I'll stand, been in the saddle 
now for going on three days!" 

There were so many questions on my mind. 
How come he always got the bad guy, and rode 
off into the sunset in a swirling cloud of dust, 
and how come you never saw the blood? 
Things were less complicated then, he mused, 
not like now where everything's so realistic, 
so there's nothing left for people to imagine;
then he disappeared without a trace... 

He's still my hero. 
These days everyone's part good part bad, 
so that the line is harder to find. 
It was easier when men wore white and rode 
high up in the saddle. The good guy always 
grabbed the glory, and the girl, then he 
disappeared in a cloud of dust with a hearty 

"Hi ho Silver, away!!"

              ********

...an exercise suggested in a poetry primer I read.
   '**********visited me last night,' (you fill in the blank!)
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Lane Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 3:08 PM
Really cool write, Keith. It would have politically incorrect for Tonto to be his friend. How sad. I'll try this exercise.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Thanks Lin! Your kind remarks are much appreciated. Keith
Emu Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Fine sentiment Keith. A worthy lament too, keep the dream alive. Craig
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Yeah... The Lone Ranger was always my favourite TV hero. Keith
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