hern sing'n see

.
                        i saw 
           past her transparent
               hern diaphanous
                       flimsy
                        totty

             though gauzy her
                   surround'd
                     visible'd 
                 no utter from
                thuh witness'd
   nor hear fromg thuh witness 
                        save
              thuh crackling uv
                 thuh sparklez
             flicker'n past hern
                    unto mine
                       visible 
                         see
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