hern sing'n see
.
i saw
past her transparent
hern diaphanous
flimsy
totty
though gauzy her
surround'd
visible'd
no utter from
thuh witness'd
nor hear fromg thuh witness
save
thuh crackling uv
thuh sparklez
flicker'n past hern
unto mine
visible
see
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