Hermit Crab

Crab in seashell squats
Until hermit does not fit -
House swaps are a must.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 1:34 PM
Nice one John :)
Allison Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 3:36 AM
that final line really made me smile John - lovely imagery in your haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
Soper Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 12:06 AM
Well done haiku John...
Pettit Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 9:02 PM
Reading this reminded me of the theme song to the 1965 film "The Glass Bottom Boat" which was performed by Doris Day. Just a few words, but they collectively say a lot.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Enjoyed!
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:07 PM
Beautiful haiku! Reminds me of the sea anemone and the hermit crab in the sea.
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