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 Name Of Sponsor ; Nette  Onclaud

       Date posted. ; 5 th June 2025

Name Of Contest  ; Spin A Shadorma

By way of additional comment this entry is based on the notion

of  a hermit being someone who finds themselves secluded,

isolated, alone due to circumstances beyond their control such as trauma, illness or abandonment

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Damp shiver, under wanton fog, lone self plight, as shrill cry, swallowed by eerie phantoms, of snow gust night’scape

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 6/5/2025 6:19:00 PM
Great job with imagery here!
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Date: 6/5/2025 6:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea I appreciate that Howard

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