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Hermit

Hermit thrush
hops, hovers, flips, flicks
gawping shy
modest nest
cup of moss, weeds, twigs, rootlets
sings so Oh! holy

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Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2025 at 4:31 PM

So original. Congrats

thriveni c mysore

June 8, 2025 at 7:04 AM

It is a shy bird, you will fall in love when you look at her I am sure. Thank you so much for your kind visit and precious time dear poet. Thank you.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

June 6, 2025 at 9:14 PM

This is nice. Congrats on your win.

thriveni c mysore

June 8, 2025 at 7:03 AM

I am pleased to know that you liked this write. It is a beautiful shy bird. Thank you so much for this sweet visit and words dear friend. Thank you.

Paula Goldsmith

June 6, 2025 at 12:25 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win.......

thriveni c mysore

June 8, 2025 at 7:03 AM

Thank you so much for this sweet words dear friend, I am glad you liked it. Thank you for the good wishes. Thank you.

Krishnanand Guptar

June 6, 2025 at 11:15 AM

Congrats on your win in this contest, friend, with a subtle write. Wishing you a pleasant day.

thriveni c mysore

June 8, 2025 at 7:02 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit and precious time dear friend. I am glad you liked this. Pleasant day indeed, thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 5, 2025 at 2:14 AM

- "gawping shy"... lovely, Thriveni :) - (I did the same words :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

thriveni c mysore

June 5, 2025 at 6:26 AM

have you seen her eyes? they are shy alright haha. Thank you so much for liking my thoughts and I am grateful to you for the good wishes dear friend. Hugs & cheers.