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Heretic Lunatic and Slug

Heretic, lunatic, slug went to tea. Two were crazy but then there was me. Raunchy laughter loud Truly insane proud. Restaurant clapped when we left there finally.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2020 8:16:00 PM

haha, the last line was an awesome finish.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/23/2020 9:53:00 PM

A good friend told me a true story and gave me the ending.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/23/2020 2:57:00 PM

LOL...me and my sisters and sis-in -law almost got kicked out of a restaurant for “having fun.” You’d fit right in my Poetry-kin!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/23/2020 4:13:00 PM

I really would! It was not actually me, but a friend of mine told me when their family left a restaurant once the entire restaurant of eaters CLAPPED.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/22/2020 11:50:00 PM

Another good verse, Caren. Stay safe.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/23/2020 4:13:00 PM

Thank you Eve. I am tired of safe, but still doing it.