Heretic Lunatic and Slug

Heretic, lunatic, slug went to tea.
Two were crazy but then there was me.
Raunchy laughter loud
Truly insane proud.
Restaurant clapped when we left there finally.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 8:16 PM
haha, the last line was an awesome finish.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 9:53 PM
A good friend told me a true story and gave me the ending.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 2:57 PM
LOL...me and my sisters and sis-in -law almost got kicked out of a restaurant for “having fun.” You’d fit right in my Poetry-kin!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 4:13 PM
I really would! It was not actually me, but a friend of mine told me when their family left a restaurant once the entire restaurant of eaters CLAPPED.
Roper Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 11:50 PM
Another good verse, Caren. Stay safe.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 4:13 PM
Thank you Eve. I am tired of safe, but still doing it.
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