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Poetic Form: Monchielle Stanza
Inspired: 2024 February 28
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Deep in thought, need release, one can involve nighttime and wish upon a star cautious bout the answer it falls right where you are. Deep in thought, need release, one can do dimensions parallels are not square left angles can twist things you're still here, think you're there. Deep in thought, need release, one can affect mystics such as the Tarot cards know the sidelines they've placed graveyards can be lifeguards. Deep in thought, need release, one can apply science try cloning your A.I. sure transforms not transplants then check out your new guy.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/29/2024 7:29:00 AM

Dear Hilo, This is a captivating journey through introspection and exploration. Your poem deftly mixes together themes of reflection, mysticism, and scientific inquiry, inviting readers to ponder the complexities of existence. The rhythmic flow and thought-provoking imagery make for a compelling read. Very insightful. - Blessings, Daniel

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/29/2024 5:40:00 PM

I'm truly grateful, Daniel, for the wealth in your eyes. They are of rare value ... a point that has been noted. Thank you, my friend. Aloha, William