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Here We Go, Here We Go

tick-tock tick-tock times edges the Seasons around tick-tock tick-tock outdoors ,Summer sounds tick-tock tick-tock times edges the months around tick-tock tick-tock the Autumn harvest abounds tick-tock tick-tock times edges the weeks around tick-tock tick-tock Winter freezes the ground tick-tock tick-tock times edges the days around tick-tock tick-tock then Spring renewal is found tick-tock tick-tock times edges the years along tick-tock tick-tock what will be our song tick-tock tick-tock times edges all,towards another place tick-tock tick-tock life eternal,comes only by grace tick-tock tick-tock

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/23/2010 9:22:00 AM

This is still one of my favorite poems written by you Brian. Love, Carol

Joshua Lacey

Date: 8/12/2009 7:15:00 AM

lovely description of how life passes by!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2009 4:54:00 AM

Brian, this is going into my favorites. As far as I am concerned this is one of the best you have ever written. Thank you my friend. Love,Carol

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/3/2009 8:48:00 PM

Brian, you are a brilliant poet in whatever form you wish to indulge. This piece immediately goes to my favs.

James Peranteau

Date: 8/3/2009 9:02:00 AM

Brian,..I may be being selfish here,...but as the tic toc's,..and the tic does toc,...I pray that paradise is 80 degrees and a slight wind with rain, heavy once a week ! *smiles* !,..I love this write sir ! james

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/3/2009 6:06:00 AM

I love the idea of time passing by as I read this piece...very good message.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2009 5:09:00 AM

Interesting. Sara