Brian Strand Poet Kyrielle

Here We Go, Here We Go

tick-tock  tick-tock
times edges the Seasons around
tick-tock  tick-tock
outdoors ,Summer sounds
tick-tock  tick-tock
times edges the months around
tick-tock  tick-tock
the Autumn harvest abounds
tick-tock  tick-tock
times edges the weeks around
tick-tock  tick-tock
Winter freezes the ground
tick-tock  tick-tock
times edges the days around
tick-tock  tick-tock
then Spring renewal is found
tick-tock  tick-tock
times edges the years along
tick-tock  tick-tock
what will be our song
tick-tock  tick-tock
times edges all,towards another place
tick-tock tick-tock
life eternal,comes only by grace
tick-tock  tick-tock

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 23, 2010 at 9:22 AM This is still one of my favorite poems written by you Brian. Love, Carol

Joshua Lacey August 12, 2009 at 7:15 AM lovely description of how life passes by!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2009 at 4:54 AM Brian, this is going into my favorites. As far as I am concerned this is one of the best you have ever written. Thank you my friend. Love,Carol

Charlene Bird August 3, 2009 at 8:48 PM Brian, you are a brilliant poet in whatever form you wish to indulge. This piece immediately goes to my favs.

James Peranteau August 3, 2009 at 9:02 AM Brian,..I may be being selfish here,...but as the tic toc's,..and the tic does toc,...I pray that paradise is 80 degrees and a slight wind with rain, heavy once a week ! *smiles* !,..I love this write sir ! james

Christopher Higgins August 3, 2009 at 6:06 AM I love the idea of time passing by as I read this piece...very good message.

Sara Kendrick August 3, 2009 at 5:09 AM Interesting. Sara